It Ended With A Song
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It Ended With A Song
It Ended In A Song:
I cannot recall how many times I had tried:
Countless failed attempts and empty promises scarred my breaking heart.
The disappointment and hate that I bore toward myself had taken hold:
The fear of damnation clouded my thoughts,
And I could not seem to escape.
An abundance of tears summoned bitter nights:
Despair and hopelessness filled my heart as I tried to get back up.
A time when sin was almost nonexistent had faded:
Temptation appeared around every corner while I tried to live righteously.
But then, as if an angel was singing, I heard a song.
In its words stood truth and love, giving me the hope I had been searching for.
My problems faded:
My weaknesses were made into my strengths.
Everything that I was holding onto vanished, as though they never were.
Sadness left my soul and joy had come forth:
I was made anew.
More than I had ever desired presented itself to me.
And just to imagine—
It ended with a song.
What do you think of this?
Please don't plagiarize
I cannot recall how many times I had tried:
Countless failed attempts and empty promises scarred my breaking heart.
The disappointment and hate that I bore toward myself had taken hold:
The fear of damnation clouded my thoughts,
And I could not seem to escape.
An abundance of tears summoned bitter nights:
Despair and hopelessness filled my heart as I tried to get back up.
A time when sin was almost nonexistent had faded:
Temptation appeared around every corner while I tried to live righteously.
But then, as if an angel was singing, I heard a song.
In its words stood truth and love, giving me the hope I had been searching for.
My problems faded:
My weaknesses were made into my strengths.
Everything that I was holding onto vanished, as though they never were.
Sadness left my soul and joy had come forth:
I was made anew.
More than I had ever desired presented itself to me.
And just to imagine—
It ended with a song.
What do you think of this?
Please don't plagiarize
iamhere4you- Admin
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Re: It Ended With A Song
hard hitting to say the least for those who have seriously been in that situation..
Gavan Johnson- mod's
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Re: It Ended With A Song
Yeah. This is going to be submitted to a yearly collection, and I pray it makes it into the book.
iamhere4you- Admin
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Re: It Ended With A Song
thats....beautiful...wow...
Mya09- mod's
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Re: It Ended With A Song
Thanks.
I'm confident that it'll get published.
I'm confident that it'll get published.
iamhere4you- Admin
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Re: It Ended With A Song
mhm im sure u will.. its pretty good. I dont have great poetic ability lol. I write a few songs every now and then but its nothing that great lol. Most of it is just to humor one of the members in my band momentarily lol.
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Re: It Ended With A Song
that was awesome! Is there somewhere I could check out your other pieces?
LOL plagiarism... *shakes head*, that's why I don't post my literature much on any forum anymore...
LOL plagiarism... *shakes head*, that's why I don't post my literature much on any forum anymore...
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Re: It Ended With A Song
Mya—I write songs every now and then, but they're never any good. You're not alone.
xXThreat—Yes, actually, I'll post my copyrighted poem up right now.
xXThreat—Yes, actually, I'll post my copyrighted poem up right now.
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